Narrative

Nope. Nope. Nope.

This was by far the weakest thing I have ever produced, once again spending too much time on research and wracking my brain for an idea for the actual narrative gave me little time to finalize my actual narrative. It had to be 6 panels and I really wanted to make it flow, thinking about it now it sounds stupid, but you learn by where you went wrong and for me, in this case it wasn't the fact that I was in need of help, I wasn't... It was the fact that, I need to seriously work on timing and get my organizational skills up to par. But, at least I take away from experience, that if it was a real life job and i was commissioned to do this, I would HAVE to schedule and plan out my hours for research, planning, development, mock up, finalize etc

Lets not, okay. At least one panel is ok.

Right?

No, be brutal, it is not good enough. Too right it isn't. Jesus, what am I thinking. Desperately need to up my game. It doesn't even have colour. I feel embarrassed that I actually handed this in as a piece of finished work? At least I take away the experience of knowing how it feels to hand in something so dire you want to shrivel up and under a rock and just pretend its not yours.